Friday, July 10, 2009

Amazing story

Listen to this song here.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lwG9ZscMXxQ

While you are listening to this song read this story that I made up when i was listening to it.
Try to read the story at the same time as i have the story written.

0:00-0:34 A mysterious man in a cloak walking in a deserted wasteland
0:35-0:59 White angelic wings burst from the man's back ripping holes in the cloak
1:00-1:10 The white-winged man begins to soar towards the Heavens
1:11-1:22 The man wraps his wings around himself and begins to fall towards the earth
1:23-1:34 The man lands on his feet and sees another man only this one has black angelic wings. The black-winged man says "What are you doing here? Do you wish to die today?" The white-winged man looks him directly in the eyes draws his sword and says "I have no intention of dying this day, I am here to finish you once and for all." The black-winged man draws his sword, laughs, and says "If your wish is to die, i shall grant you that one request."
1:35-1:45 The black-winged angel lunges forward catching the white-winged man off guard he strikes him with his sword. The white-winged man staggers from the strike, but he still valiantly stand to fight the black-winged man. Back and forth they repeatedly attack and block each others relentless strikes. Until the white-winged angel is struck to the ground.
1:46-1:58 The black-winged man walks over to him, he tries to stand but falls to his knees and hangs his head in near defeat. The black-winged man says "I knew you couldnt do it, I know all your moves we are exactly alike, you and me. You'll always be as evenly matched as me."
1:59-2:22 The white-winged man looks up and says, "I'll never be anything like you, you are a monster I am a savior. You are made up of evil, I am made of power that you can't even begin to imagine, this power inside of me is greater than anything you can ever achieve." The black-winged man begins to feel something, he tries to hide his fear, "You-your bluffing I am all powerful nothing can stop me." The white-winged man says, "believe what you may your reign as ruler has come to an end." The black-winged man responds, "No it can't be I am the chosen ruler, I am supposed to live forever!"
2:23-2:48 The white-winged man begins to stand up, astonished the black-winged angel screams, "NO NO NO!!!! THAT ATTACK SHOULD HAVE CRIPPLED YOU!!! HOW ARE YOU STILL STANDING!!!" The white-winged angel chuckles and says, "Like I said, inside of me is an unimaginable power a power that you don't have." The black-winged man takes a step back, his voice shaking he says, "No it can't be! That power, it's IT'S..." The white-winged man finishes his sentence, "That's right, it's father."
2:49-2:54 The white-winged man lunges forward and the black-winged man is pushed backwards, with a quick strike the black-winged man's sword is thrown out of his hand.
2:55-3:17 The white-winged man continues to strike his foe his eyes glow a bright golden color as he begins to take down his foe.
3:18-3:27 The black-winged angel falls to his knees, defeated. His final words slip out, barely more than a whisper. "Why brother? Why did father choose you?" The white-winged man's replies, "Simple, he chose me because you became too powerful."

This story is what this song makes me think of please tell me what you think of it.

4 comments:

  1. wow....that's AMAZING! it's like lucifer vs. michael or gabriel...

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  2. That's exactly what i was thinking when i was writing this story in my head.

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  3. hey do you know marissa and candice's emails? i want those pics of me covered in mud! lol

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